Wow, that was really good. Very well written--it had Riot's smooth and pompous voice. I like how in the beginning he's trying to make to figure out the whole Jem/Rio/Jerrica thing and he finds out in the end. I also agree that passion does make you do things in a reckless fashion. Most of the time, women are fools for Riot, but it seems he's a fool for Jem--but not for too long. Great work!

I loved this story it was amazing. I also love how riot got jem/jerrica because i know he would accept her for who she was rio was way to violent at times about things.

Wow--this was amazing. it was so eloquently written, and both Riot and Jem/Jerrica were in perfect character! I am so excited, I really love the Jem/Riot pairing, and I want this to be the way they turn out. Riot is so awesome, he doesn't mind that she's really Jerrica. Fantastic job!

nice!

I would love to read more of this.

Hi!
I really loved your story
You have Riot down beautifully!
It was such a treat to read
You have an amazing talent for wrtiting and I hope you will write more.
Hopefully more stories involing Riot , as he is my favorite character in the Jem series

Love this chapter, hope you continue. 8o)

Very good fic!
Try make one a little more longer

I love it! Another Jerrica and Riot fanfic writer! This makes me very happy! Please continue on! Can't wait for more!

Sarah