I think you should re-write it now if you are going to. That way people don't have to start at the beginning again to see what changes. I'm glad you will be adding more I really love this story.

Cliffy! I love this story!! Keep updating!

I can't wait untill Bella wakes up and Edward tells her.

Yes, that was sad and unfortunate. But, it wasn't too graphic so don't worry too much about that. I've read worse. nightmare worse :(

Hahahahahahaha! They waxed Emmett's chest and legs!! I loved that part!

Happy Birthday! Have fun and be good! (by good i mean bad ;)

Absolutely hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love your story! When do you normally update like once a week?

they've got time for lovin' and we've got time to wait to read it! No worries

so jess was the side girl? interesting. edward likes his bella. so is bella gonna take the job jess quit?

hm...jacob can't have cared for bella very much if he already has a new girlfriend. good job!

ha! edward think's he might jessica more than bella? had me laughing!

I'm intrigued, so I'm giving it a shot ;) I like it so far!

to R_P_girl:

Thanks. Im writing more now, wel not now, imjust going to college in a minute.
I have started the new chapter, and written about a page, i have also started the onshot which goes with this stoy, knda an alternate ending, thats about two pages right now.

That was a awsome story! When will you be adding more? That was wow that was an awsome story i want more!