This story started out cute, and turned to awkward and mature... but not in a bad way. It's so cute the way Mana is so innocent, and then awkward but funny because Atem has to explain! lol Update soon! =)

lol awkward conversation!

Well, THAT conversation was certainly awkward to say the least.

That was really great! I enjoyed the atmosphere that you created with your descriptive word choice. I could picture it exactly. It was a tremendous job. I especially enjoyed the "RA DAMMIT." That was very clever lol. I look forward to reading more :)

yay i in the chapter xD
and yuhss IT IS AH-MAZINGG!
i dun think i could ever write like you do!
please write moree soon!
its getting really gud!
i loove atem(u) x mana
and more importantly...
I LOVE ATEM(U)
(yeh tht stupid spelling of the name thing xD )
there arnt enough of these, and the ones that there are, are liek all rated k or k+ uck. not m.
lol xD

so yeah write more as soon as ya can! if you keep writing,,ill keep reading! :D

-Hikari (Jenna) (=

Talk about an Awkward moment! So funny! :) Great chapter, bit on the short side but still Brill! I thought you'd never update! Dont wait so long next time! ;)

*squeals happily* AW! He only feels like that around her, how cute!! But wow, he carried her there even after she ran off. I can't wait to see what happens next with these two and more ManaxAtem stories?! Really! YAY!! ^-^

Love it!! I seriously love it =D

Keep this up! *fangirls*

~Thail

cool... I liked how you pictured Atem as playful and mischievous yet polite, dignified, and such a gentleman at the same time. I'm glad we share the same perspective of the cute pharaoh...

PLEASE WRITE MORE! THIS STORY IS AH-MAZING! I LOVE IT!

Oh...Ilove it!! Very Sexy! I just love Atem! your story is just Brill!! :] Keep it going!! Update as fast as you can! Dobt keep us readers waiting!

Love it :D

~Thail

lol, ha, Atem got a boner. awe hes embarrased. And its natural for him to be, Mana too.
thats what i like about this story. Its "real" realistic. NOt some perfect romance lemon story.
u put teen akwardness in. U really show the changes that happen in boy and girl friendships.
XD! update soon!

(deep breaths) Okay, nothing... out-of-hand has happened yet so I have more time to prepare myself for when something DOES get started. Thank goodness. I wonder about how you're going to write it because I've seen... (a few)... different styles.

Wow, you updated pretty quickly!! *claps happily* Oh come on Atemu, don't deny that you love Mana as well!! But aw, Atemu blushes so easily and it wasn't weird at all. Hurray for longer chapters!! ^-^