I am really enjoying this story so far. I hope you update soon.

Very good so far, can't wait until the fireworks at Hogwarts.

great job with the story so far, the only real problem I see is the way you are spelling 'Treacy Davis'. you do realize it is spelled Tracey Davis, right? if not, then I am glad to inform you so that you can either correct your mistakes or prevent new ones from arising. Waiting for your next installment, Cam,.,

Brilliant work! Yearning for me

This story is great!

The most awesome scene I have ever seen in a fanfiction were the ones in the last chapter, the emptying of the House Black and the pledge of protection. One of the best things I've ever read! Awesome job writing this! Great work!

I hope this story is continued, is rare to find stories like this.

Great story, please continue this.

Amazing fic so far, I hope you update soon! XD

i have been enjoying this story so far until this chapter, after reading this i find myself confused. in the last chapter a healer took the charms off of everyone, now everyone is acting like it didn't happen. why hasn't anything been done about Serius? Harry gave testimony and memories and i thought it was agreed that he would be cleared. Several things have been mentioned as though they are important to the plot but never brought up again could you clear this up for me please.

Good chapter but felt short. I have enjoyed your story over the years and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Stan

can you please update this story

most ppl wont beta a story until its complete

Good chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this story.

this is a great story

I like the general plot line yet things seem rushed.

In this chapter you have Harry both invite and bring in people who have never been to or know the secret of a house under the fidelius charm. He never even mentioned were to go so he could bring them in even if he was the secret keeper!

Also you seem a bit too interested in getting you rocks off by turning characters into upper crust snobs or ignorant fools unwilling to part with their preconceived notions. You started in the wrong year if you are trying to set wizarding customs and speech patterns to a point as out dated as their clothing. Where had all this prissy language and customs been for the last FOUR YEARS in your story?

A diary from his mother and a personality altering pendant that can talk telepathically does not change anyone other than the fool who put it on. You might as well have given Harry an ancient Potter horcrux for everything it does to him.

This is a fabulous story. Your characters are well developed, and the plot is very interesting. You seem to have some problems with typos. There are several misspelled words in every chapter and some grammar issues. The French you used in an earlier chapter also had some errors. These are small things that I've learned to ignore in the course of reading fanfiction, but they still detract from the quality of the story overall. Perhaps you should look into another beta. Ultimately, I hope you update soon. I'd really like to see where this story goes!