 WhiteElfElder 2009-10-29 . chapter 5Interesting so far. Of course, after sleeping with Tonks and spending so much time with her Harry would fall in love...that is natural. Strange pairing with Hermione and Remus...the age difference alone. |
 potter phoenix 1 2009-10-06 . chapter 5this is an awsome story and i can't wait till you update it |
 Space Odin 2009-08-13 . chapter 5awesome story so far, can't wait for more! |
 ArcaneMaverick 2009-06-24 . chapter 5Hmm Remus and Hermione eh? I'm gonna put this under alert. Good luck with continuing! |
 ArcaneMaverick 2009-06-24 . chapter 4Just a slight correction or two. It is spelled "horcrux" and "Platform 9 and 3/4".
Also, I'm not too happy with how Harry yet again allowed Tonks to change into someone just for sex. I know its supposed to be for grief or something, but I don't think it is handled delicately enough. Ginny I think I can see, but not Cho. She and Harry barely had anything. She was merely his first crush. I don't see how the history between Harry and Cho warrants him to get over her by sleeping with a mimic. When they were going out he was only 14 anyway. |
 ArcaneMaverick 2009-06-24 . chapter 1One question. Why did Harry name Tonks, Lilith? |
 Killjoy3000 2009-06-20 . chapter 1nice so when is the next chapter here and adultfanfition |
 cyiusblack 2009-05-04 . chapter 4update soon |
 Silo666 2009-05-04 . chapter 4nice to see an update hope to see more soon |
 Lloyd Neruameshi 2009-04-03 . chapter 3update soon |
 tankersley1 2009-02-10 . chapter 3nice update i was thinking it had become abandoned |
 Beth5572 2009-01-27 . chapter 3I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
Thank you,
Terri |
 Dirt Rider 712 2009-01-21 . chapter 3Great story! Very interesting! Some parts feel a bit rushed though.
Dirt Rider |
 jojobevco 2009-01-21 . chapter 3Good Chapter |
 Silo666 2009-01-20 . chapter 3nice i hope u keep them coming |