The story was pretty well written, and has alot of potential. I suggest, maybe you should have a flash back that pairs Hilda with Melfina?

It has been 1 year, 5 months and 20 some odd days since your last update (so I think). This goes far beyong tease. This, is torture. Please continue with your story, it's really good and it's making lots of people happy, like me Please have mercy on us!

I love this story, actually, its the first one I read at Outlaws and Constructs. Please, don't leave all your fans hanging. We want to know if Harry finds his body and gets with Gene and if Gene is going to beat the s #t out of Ron. (He really should since Gene learned that Ron beat up Harry because Harry was/is gay.)

You can't be that evil just to leave it there! Please, please, please update! This is one of the best OLS fics I've read in a long time!

Keep it up!

.it was all nice and it writes like the real series! I mean like the way you space everything and all that! It's so great! You need to update this! And son!

I'm sorry, I just can't see Harry as being gay. First of all, he was obsessed with melfina, and before that he asked ron if Hilda was "hot". Even more then that, If you can dress like that, you're really secure in your sexuality. But it's still a good story, asides.

I love, love, love it so far. To tell you the truth, this is my first time ever reading Outlaw Star fiction and I haven't seen Outlaw Star in quite a while, but still... I'm simply writhing for more.

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! omg i love this fic, i started reading it about a year ago and i STILL love it. its teh plot i tell ye. very very good. oh yeah pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more i mean this is something great and im gonna to suggest it to all my buddies out there. there are only so many Gene Harry ficcies out there. love it love it well.

When does this come out? Cause I can't wait. This is first I've read anything of this pairing and I'm starting to believe it.

oo,oo, BTW
1)2x1

2)Prolly

3)Yes I was wondering. Thank you.

aWWW MAN, DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING! I LOVED HARRY MACDOUGAL DEEPLY IN THE SERIES, HE WAS SO GENTLE AND SWEET, YET WITH A VIOLENT TEMPER. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY SOON!

I absolutely love Harry and Gene as a couple, but this is like, the only fic that even mentions it. I don't understand why anyone else hasn't picked up on the fact that they're so dang cute together! And you can't possibly stop here! I've looked on your website and it's been forever since you updated this story! Right when it was getting good! I'd love to know when you update.

I liked the lesbian stuff, what little of it there was.

c'mon, you gotta keep this going, it's turning out really well very good potential, and harry is adorable...anyway, update!

Hoo-aaa! i can't wait for more!

Nooo! You can't stop writing there! Come on! It's been almost a month since you updated it! (Ignoring the fact that it was 2 months before this update D But you can't just leave it there! I don't have enough of an imagination in the OS series to try to even guess what happens! You just gotta write more! Onegai! Stalker