I tried to catch the Inuyasha reference, I really did. But I couldn't find it.

Yay, someone else who is a newb at yaoi/slash/shounen-ai/whatever you want to call it. Good luck!

This could do with a bit more spaces so that the paragrahphs don't look so bunchy, and you might have wanted to expand the plot/action a bit further, but a good yaoi fic all up.

My favorite part would have to be the whole 'Mother' sequence.

Good luck!

Awh... Poor Bakura...*sniffle*

Aw, 'tis so cute.
Poor little Bakura. x(
why get revenge when he can be loved again? XD silly boy.
I think its really cute how Marik reminded him of his mother, but that also brings disturbing thoughts of how Marik would be as a parent XD
Nicely done!