 NateSean 2008-12-30 . chapter 1After nearly ten years it's good to see something new from you and Madam Foogie again.
Still some of the same grammar issues. There are times when I can't tell if a character is speaking or not because of the lack of quotation marks. It doesn't seem like a huge deal but it can definitely effect the flow of the story.
Otherwise it's good to read a new story from you. I like your unique view of the prot/Robert situation.
Have you read K-PAX 4 yet? |