You have interesting stories, but I really think that you need to get a beta and proofread your work. There are a lot of typos and most of your work doesn't flow very well. For example, in Chapter 1, Horcrux is spelled wrong, Headquarters should be capitalized, and should have had an apostrophe to indicate ownership.

That was incredibly sweet! I wasn't sure at first of the separate short chapters instead of a single chapter one shot. It ended up making it really sweet and unique. I like it!

I never saw a format like this

It was good, but I normaly go for longer storys

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I really liked these :D

major good.