Please continue, it's amusing. Will Fai learn about the King's plan about a certain girl? Will she be able to survive? Will Fai save her? Oh so many question left unanswered.. Please continue!

Also are you going to keep going and into the time where they go collect the feather? That would be interesting... Anyway basically just please continuing and updating the story!

Good chapter, but you might want to change the line near the end saying "Your department of this world is now". Department isn't quite the word I' think you're looking for… I think the word you're looking for is "departure" or "departing", right? As it is, the line really confused me, as I kept thinking of storage containers… Anyway, just something I thought I should point out, though I think others may have.

I meant to review this bonus chapter and the previous 2 chapters before this earlier. Well this little extra chapter was great! I liked the cameos by Kurogane and Yuuko. The argument was good. I liked the part where Yuki mockingly said " 'Why do you need my hairbrush when you already have one?' " The last two actual chapters were good too. I'm excited to see what happens next _

I'll take option D thank-you...

Now I find it hard to say this calmly so I'll just get right to the point...:

GET OF YOUR LAZY-ASS AND UPDATE! IT HAS BEEN 2 - ALMOST 3 - DAMNED MONTHS SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE! I HAD BETTER NOT HAVE STAYED UP LATE TONIGHT READING THIS WHOLE ENTIRE FANFIC FOR ABSOLUTLY NOTHING!

Hurry up and damn update.

Now, I'm going to go PM you just to let the message sink in.

Hyuu

Zoey-Chan

Ahaha! Kuro-puppy got to troll! XXD

And you MUST continue of course! I will never forgive you if you don't!

I'm hoplessly addicted to Fai! He's so adorable! He's the ONLY reason I even bother to watch/read Tsubasa. Congrats for coming up with a splendid fanfic!

I pic ! oh and A too. *shot*

Ahem. I really enjoyed the updates and the Yuuko and Kuro's reaction to seeing them was hilarious but seriously guys, you take too long to update.

D

sorry if i didn't review chapter 17. i wanted to put the reviews in one place! cause seeing i don't really have much time in the world...

anyway, on with the review!

in chapter 17...

what was yuki thinking? of course even though fai look thin but, of course he still muscular! (i have many friends that thin but they have this muscle i never thought to see!)

ashura the second is here ashura is here! with yasha? now how did that happen? i hope i can read ashura's story a little...*puppy eyes* (give the-am-i-not-a-cute-innocent-little-kitty look)

i like the bonus chapter! it's so funny!

and i just have to agree with umma. yuuko and kuro-tan joined! it was cool! and it made things more hilarious!

no wonder you guys give this chapter the title 'Glaring Dimensions of Time' hehehehe

voting!(i love voting!)

alright, hm... i want to vote D! but, i like cliffies, it what made me become so curious and got attract ! so... can i vote two choice? C and D is the best answer!

Like I said, I expect sacrifices...that or I get to sick Giant Bananas of Destruction and a Rabid Gaara on you. You choose who gets sacrificed and who gets a free twinkie. D Update Soon!

A and D.

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Wow, that's kind of weird. the Whole A AnD D thing?

Both: OMG !

Sara: *wipes tear from eye* that is hilarious!

Kisa: OhH YEAH! So dear sister of mine-

Sara: Oh boy, this never ends up well

Kisa: *glares* It won't if you keep enterupting me, anywasy-

Sara: You spelt interupting wrong

Kisa: *Glares adn growls* That's it, DIE !

Sara: ACK! *Runs away from computer as Kisa chases me all around the house and farm. Random friend walks in and see's teh computer*

Vi: Um...hi?

*chokes with laughter* Ed and Roy's...love-child? *laughs harder then gets serious* I'm a strict no-yaoi person, but I found that extremely hilarious!

Kuro-wanwan and Yuuko joined in on the fun huh? XD Priceless reactions.

Nyuuu I choose D! I'm just glad there wasn't a cliffhanger this time! There better not be one next time though! XD

D: I read this chapter in less than 5 minutes. Either i read too fast or this chapter lacked something. For this and lack of updates I expect sacrifices...that or I get to sick Giant Bananas of Destruction and a Rabid Gaara on you. You choose who gets sacrificed and who gets a free twinkie. D Update Soon!

Awesome I love this story

and I chose D just because I can