Is this not finished? I want more. I have been laughing for the last 30 min reading this and you end it here. Updata!

oh lordy now he's made the two women disgruntled. brilliant! I love the play between the two brothers as well. I'm in stitches howling over it all.

Hahahahahahahahahaha i love it! He's just standing there like stunned over the whole thing and there's Inuyasha, who probably had trouble keeping his mouth shut the entire time. hahaha

Okay, this was brilliant.

First of all, it's really well written, very detailed, and kind of leads the reader along so they're just waiting in anticipation for the punch line instead of serving it up as fast as possible. It makes for a better comedic **.

Second, there were so many lines that made me laugh. No one was out of character, but they were all very funny and the everyone's lines sort of flowed together in a nice way.

Sesshoumaru's attitude was epic when he offered to introduce Inuyasha to the farmer, and when he insulted Kagome. Even better was the was Inuyasha reacted when Kagome was upset. "Am I a prospect?" "No!"

Anyway, great job. This is really good. I've read your dark/horror, your p0rn, and now this, and you have a lot of talent with several very different genres and a very good style as well.

STEVE HOLT!

Oh, LadyB, that was just what I needed! Damn it, Miroku, when will he ever learn? Hopefully not soon, it makes a hilarious story!

giggles love it!

lol lol lol i love it! i will say this i thought the same thing when i saw sesshomaru.

You're like, the queen of big words

Oh, Miroku is one messed up monk! But incredibly entertaining. I delight in discovering how this day can get worse for Sesshomaru and his lot. =)

wow^^ lol love it funny^^

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
MIROKU
HAS
A
DEATH
WISH
!
I can't believe he would even CONSIDER something like that with Sesshoumaru right there! And I have to laugh again.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I'm honestly laughing hysterically. With the ending of Feudal Fairytales, and then this... =D =D =D
Jin is incredible. Really. And you're incredible. To think of something different- I honestly expected that he was proposing to Rin! I reread the paragraph three times just to make sure, and then started laughing my head off!

Please write more? Your short stories are amazing!

HHM

sweet Kami Miroku must have a death wish... wow... I love it thou and eagerly await the next chapter

oh my! this is HILARIOUS! i havent laughed out loud from reading a fanfic in so long! xD

do you plan on finishing this? i would love to see more :D

Well IF ur gonna do another chap anyway :D

OMG! lol u r truely a gr8 writer! :D lol protective Sesshy YAY lol aww so cute x3 WRITE MORE! :D

Frm ur fan: ForeverADarkAngel x

P.S. More of protective Sesshy :D