this is like really cool. I've never seen one where it's about edwards human life. you should continue...
-Shadow

Wow... Interesting. I'd like to know what happens..

I like the idea, but the chapter was a little sketchy. There were also a lot of mistakes… It's not really as good as usual.
I think it has really good potential though, and I would like to see how you continue it!
Thanks,
Rebecca.

this was good. i think u should continue. cant wait to read more.

I really have enjoyed this first story. You really have replicated the 1900's and how Edward would be. I really do hope you continue with this story.

Kinda cool

i like the idea ^^

aw i thought that was really cute. so edward, all shyish, girl crazy...aww! lol, more please!

who's ms. cathy? i don't really like the idea of edward liking someone else...since in twilight, he said that he's never felt that way before. anyways, i still ove this story and i love it and i lov eit and please please update sooN!