|Reviews for Chained for life|
| candibear 7/13/09 . chapter 10
i hate your story. james sirius and lizzie should just have left lily the * !# alone and let her decide if she liked james or not on her own! god damn smug bastards!
| candibear 7/13/09 . chapter 6
can you please make sirius and lizzie die?
| candibear 7/13/09 . chapter 3
why can't james just die in a hole? honestly!
he was being a perverted jerk and tugging her around just because, and then he says the SHE'S the problem!
| VM 6/10/09 . chapter 1
hey i love this story and have read it like 4 times! i just realized sumthin though it says that the main characters are james/lily luna...and lily luna is harry and ginny's daughter...might want to fix that but it's no big deal...again i love this story and i can't wait to read what else you've written!
| Norinaway 1/5/09 . chapter 1
I just read this and tbh wasn't all that impressed. Don't get me wrong i liked the story, but some of your facts are wrong, which just bugged me! I am really annoying like that! Firstly somewhere you wrote 9th or 9 years at school, how they had maths and some other similar things. I thought it was a good story, but I think you need to get a read through before hand, just incase. Also you kept using no instead of know!
I hope i wasn't too harsh but i did enjoy this story!
| Peppermintwist 12/30/08 . chapter 4
hahahahaha. omg the part where Lizzie and Lily were gonna paint James's toenails was hysterical! I absolutely loved it!
| featherfinger 12/19/08 . chapter 10
Aww this is such a sweet story! I loved it, it was well thought through.
But you do have quite a few typos and some confusing parts, where maybe somethings been forgotton, perhaps reading it through again, yourself or someone else, before you post it will help.
Brilliant idea. x
| featherfinger 12/17/08 . chapter 1
This Is an interesting idea, I have about two problems though, you keep switching between I Lily and tenses. Also at the beginning it's a bit hard to understand when things are going on, I think there are flash backs, but it's not very clear.
| RoseRoseRose 12/3/08 . chapter 10
I LOVE THIS STORY, and will read it again and again. I look forward to reading more from you, i know they'll be grat too!
| Knight 03 12/3/08 . chapter 10
Very sweet ending
Guess she's right, Lily wouldn't be Lily without James!
I want my very own James now :)
| Iccle Amy 12/3/08 . chapter 10
Love the story.
The last chapter was the perfect ending!
| Apocalyptic Carnage 12/3/08 . chapter 10
-blushes-oh, u! saying thank you specificly to me?
i'm gonna cry-crys hystaricly-
great job BTW!
i think you should do one last chappie and then end it!
it looks about right to be ended
| BrittanyPattinson 12/3/08 . chapter 10
LOVED IT SO MUCH
WRITE MORE !
| AllAtOnce 11/26/08 . chapter 9
ahh please please continue
| humanbeing.mee 11/26/08 . chapter 9
amazing, as always :)
keep the good work/writing