i hate your story. james sirius and lizzie should just have left lily the * !# alone and let her decide if she liked james or not on her own! god damn smug bastards!

can you please make sirius and lizzie die?

thx.

why can't james just die in a hole? honestly!

he was being a perverted jerk and tugging her around just because, and then he says the SHE'S the problem!

god!

kill him!

hey i love this story and have read it like 4 times! i just realized sumthin though it says that the main characters are james/lily luna...and lily luna is harry and ginny's daughter...might want to fix that but it's no big deal...again i love this story and i can't wait to read what else you've written!

I just read this and tbh wasn't all that impressed. Don't get me wrong i liked the story, but some of your facts are wrong, which just bugged me! I am really annoying like that! Firstly somewhere you wrote 9th or 9 years at school, how they had maths and some other similar things. I thought it was a good story, but I think you need to get a read through before hand, just incase. Also you kept using no instead of know!

I hope i wasn't too harsh but i did enjoy this story!

hahahahaha. omg the part where Lizzie and Lily were gonna paint James's toenails was hysterical! I absolutely loved it!

Aww this is such a sweet story! I loved it, it was well thought through.

But you do have quite a few typos and some confusing parts, where maybe somethings been forgotton, perhaps reading it through again, yourself or someone else, before you post it will help.

Brilliant idea. x

This Is an interesting idea, I have about two problems though, you keep switching between I Lily and tenses. Also at the beginning it's a bit hard to understand when things are going on, I think there are flash backs, but it's not very clear.

I LOVE THIS STORY, and will read it again and again. I look forward to reading more from you, i know they'll be grat too!

-ROSE

Very sweet ending

Guess she's right, Lily wouldn't be Lily without James!

I want my very own James now :)

-Knight 03

Love the story.

The last chapter was the perfect ending!

Well Done!

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-blushes-oh, u! saying thank you specificly to me?

i'm gonna cry-crys hystaricly-

great job BTW!

i think you should do one last chappie and then end it!

it looks about right to be ended

LOVED IT SO MUCH

WRITE MORE !

ahh please please continue

amazing, as always :)

keep the good work/writing

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