|Reviews for The Land of Lightheart|
| Angelsrm 10/24/09 . chapter 3
So... what happened?
| WishDreamer 3/2/09 . chapter 3
This is so cool! I'm a fan of his, too, and I thought this was amazing. It has very unique ideas, well-paced, and pretty well descripted. You could probably stand to expand on how the reef or coral looks or how the characters are moving or playing. How a horse could trod in water, unless it walked on the sand bed, is a little fuzzy. But I hope you write more! This was amazing
| Car 12/20/08 . chapter 1
hey "alissa" wassup?