So... what happened?

This is so cool! I'm a fan of his, too, and I thought this was amazing. It has very unique ideas, well-paced, and pretty well descripted. You could probably stand to expand on how the reef or coral looks or how the characters are moving or playing. How a horse could trod in water, unless it walked on the sand bed, is a little fuzzy. But I hope you write more! This was amazing

hey "alissa" wassup?

peace, l