So glad you're updating again. Great chapter!

Well done.

We like this. A lot.

Perfect mischeviousness, perfect character, all in ~300 words.

RA

wow.

this is really good.

Wow. Lily did always strike me as Teddy's soulmate. Quite the interesting twist to put it in Victiore's point of view.

good hope you write more

*giggle* this was really cute :)

OMG i had to finish reading all the other chapters it was thrilling, exciting and so UNHOLY.GREAT!

Victoire always so vain and jealous. cant wait to read more.

Just love Lily/Teddy ships my FAVE cant wait to read next chapter.

write more fast

te he. What about it's smell? Always look for loop holes!

Doyle

Poor Victoire

Doyle

aw, cute, what did he do? Or did you just want them to be arguing for an unknown reason?

Doyle

Lily/Teddy, oh, I'm going ot try to write a Lily/Teddy slash now! I really like this, I'd visit the forum, but my mom is convinsed that all online people are mad sex afenders or something, so ya.

I like the story, time to read the next chapter.

Doyle