 OffCenterFold 9/15/10 . chapter 17I understand you'd rather beta-read and all that, but isn't seven years long enough to leave us hanging for the final outcome?
This work is epic, in... oh, pretty much every sense. I do hope you change your mind about writing. I truly enjoy your writing. It's not your fault the PTB are an... ahh... I mean, obsessively particular. There is so much win in this... |
 ss10009 8/1/08 . chapter 17No, no, NO! This is a wonderful story, but I'm begging you, on my hands and knees, please finish it. I'm dying to see the end. This is a fantastic story that needs its closure. Please, please, please! I know this story hasn't been updated in nearly (12 days 'til) 5 years. But, please, allow me my sanity of what happens next and finish it. This story is so absolutely terrific that it deserves an ending! |
 Relia Ruki 12/8/07 . chapter 17 Hey. I just finished this story and it's really good.
But you leave off and no one knows what happens! I really hope that you can finish this story sometime. That would be cool!
Other than a few grammar and spelling mistakes, this is a wonderful story!
I really do hope that you can post the last chapter. |
 Reila Ruki 12/7/07 . chapter 10 This is a really good chapter. It's fun to see another side of battousai! good job! |
 Damaged Ghost of an Angel 12/5/07 . chapter 5for this chapter, this was my favourite paragraph
The thing was about the size of an outstretched hand, and it felt soft to the touch. The outside was a rainbow of red, orange, yellow, and green swirled together. The fruit even smelled like color.
wonderful description. you captured a mango perfectaly. you are a really good writer.
I loved it when sano was crying on battousai's sleeve. that was really cute
i cannot wait to see what happens! |
 Damaged Ghost of an Angel 12/4/07 . chapter 3Thus far, this is really funny!
I'm really enjoying it!
My favourite quote is "No, my sword is to kill, not to protect the dimwitted. You should have Shinta in here, not me.
good job thus far and i can't wait to keep reading! |
 NamarieGreenleaf 2/6/07 . chapter 17holy shit...thats all...well, and that i really love this! please continue pwease? |
 Adelaide MacGregor 1/17/07 . chapter 17Where is the rest of it? It's been over 3 years and you only need one more chapter! Great job by the way, love the idea, no matter how long it took me to read! For some reason it took me like a year to read this, like a fall back story. Great job though! I've been devouring it the last few days, should say it took me a year to read the first 10 chapters! Haha! |
 jmj102 1/12/07 . chapter 17 DAMMIT UPDATE ! |
 Adelaide MacGregor 4/5/06 . chapter 8(7-8)Great chapters! I'm loving the story, its a great idea. You've done a great job mixing the souls and the feelings of the two worlds. Great job! |
 Adelaide MacGregor 2/27/06 . chapter 6Adorable! I can't remember if I've reviewed your story yet or not, but if I haven't, I am really enjoying reading it. You've done a great job with the technicalities of writing, as well as a great mixture of conversation and thought, with great emotion and explanation given as well. I love the idea also. It's a great one becuase of the complex characters that are in RK. Wonderful job! I can't wait to read the rest of it! |
 sum1 4/14/05 . chapter 17 please update! this is the best story ever that i have read for the past month! that has to mean something. i read your story in one day! please update. and i still don't understand what some of what soujiro says. maybe you could put translations? though it really doesn't bother me. just wanted to mention that. |
 mari 4/13/05 . chapter 16 and one more question.. which i hope you would.. though i think you would.. how come tokio suddenly acted the way she did?.. and is that all you're making battousai do? visit megumi and do nothing else? just doesn't make sense to me.. and i thought he was supposed to be important or something.. please do update.. hehe.. |
 mari 4/13/05 . chapter 17 you have to write! i know you write for yourself but don't you even care a bit for us, your readers? leaving such a cliff hanger like that.. gr.. you're story's great.. and the supernatural thing's really cool.. hehe.. i'm sorry.. haven't been reading supernatural fanfics but yours is really cool.. you have to update soon.. i know you last updated about 2 years ago.. at least it says on the page.. but you have to continue this story! it's really great and nice and has so much twists in the plot.. you're a really great writer.. you have to update.. please? *kneels and begs* and all your characters have their own attitudes and man, you have lots of characters.. in your story at least.. i mean they all have their unique attitudes and all that you made for them.. it's really cool.. and making 3 good-looking guys to women was really unbelievable for me.. haha.. but you pulled it off.. and even with them being women, you could make them really serious.. though they also are funny.. anyway.. i just love the way you made sanosuke two souls, sano-chan and zanza.. please do update! ah! it would make me go crazy if you didn't.. love your story..: |
 Isaac says Booga 10/9/04 . chapter 17Holy...Crap... This story is awesome. |