great

did you know that you're a fabulous writer? haha i always love reading your stuff...and your metaphor was wonderful!

Oh! I loved your story! It was so descriptive. I could picture it like I was there! The way you wrote the relationship between T&G was beautiful! Please update soon!!

Aww that was so cute!!

aw!! this was so sweet!! and he said it!! he said I love you!! :D:D:D:D
yay! :) And on Christmas!! I want Christmas to come already!! :)

aww that was well cute :D I loved it :D

xx Daph

This was great. Loved it...

JENNIFER

I liked it. There's tension and indecision between them and they really need to bite the bullet and talk.

Love this song too.

intriguing first chapter :)
awaiting patienty for the next.
x

aw...that was so cute!!

This was gOOD hope there is more...

JENN

ah ok so im pretty much getting excited! the first chapter was excellent!
and they are called verses :)
great job!!

tay