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Volleygirl07
2009-10-21 . chapter 10
You've been holding back the chapters on mediaminer! lol. I absolutely love how you've meshed the two stories. I am really excited to see some more chapters! The "Penny for your thoughts" chapter did not feel over dramatic to me at all. You did the encounter well. I would like to know how Hinata is feeling and if she's going to try something similar in the future, but over all the story is great and I am looking forward to reading more.
Arfa
2009-10-16 . chapter 10
The story is great, even though updates are not regular each of them are met with a smile lol :)
thanks for the story :DD
kazukarin
2009-10-12 . chapter 10
lol nice chap so srry for the extra late reply xD school sucks!! anyway loved the drama hear for real hahahahahahahahahaah btw i was wondering will u add the inuyasha characters on future chaps? cause if u do that is IF U DO u can add the pairings u r missing like kakashi sango or itachi sango or something random and weird like that even sakura inuyasha hahahah that wuld b a frst for me xD good luck!
Kage Hasu
2009-10-01 . chapter 10
Poor Kagome and Naruto, this is going to take awhile to get over this obstacle...On their way to Darkness Village (that is to say inside it) will any of the demons recognize Kagome? Or have heard her legend? Also could you put in more Kyuubi (I absolutely luv Kyuubi...when he's not a total evil bastard) Update soon.
o0KittyBlue0o
2009-10-01 . chapter 10
Maa good job so far. I'm thinking...

sasuke/ten ten
Kakashi/Anko
Itachi/Rin sounds kinda neat
Jiraiya/Tsunade...(dont like it and I'd rather him with a common woman from Kohana but yeah)
Neji/Temari(pride is pride, both understand that)
Shika/Hinata sounds meh I do like Temari with him too, but I wanna see something diff.

Gaara/Rin sounds REALLY good,
Lee/Sakura XD
Kiba while vying for Kagome ends up with Ino?! Miss loves to be pretty ends up with mister beastie?!

I'd like to tell you while I usually dont go for Naru/Kagome I do like your story T_T I felt you made them like insta in love however and would like more challenges! Like Kagome getting another crush on someone! XD I'd just love to see her blushing prettily when Gaara pats her head or something.
Ichigo Mirai
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
very good still! please update whenever you get the chance... can't wait to read what happens next in this!
ShiTsukisama
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
Update. NOW.
LuLuCrazeD
2009-09-22 . chapter 10
it was a long wait, but i did really enjoy this chapter.
cool itachi/rin is actually a choice now that could work in this story??
i vote for itachi/rin! i don't really like ino/itachi pairings
not too sure why, but i dont.
please update again soon!
xKagex
2009-09-20 . chapter 10
Update soon!
SabakuMoon
2009-09-20 . chapter 10
This story is great and having a few dramatic chapters is okay.

And hopefully you could start a Bleach or Vampire Knight -Inuyasha crossover. Im leaning towards Vampire Knight more than Bleach. I been itching for a good VK crossover INY for a while, and seeing how you write already, you would definitly write a good story for this.
RoseGlass
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
Awesome chapter!
The building tension is very suspenseful...leading towards impatience...which is code for wth happens next?
the ending hug between Itachi and Kagome was soo cute I LOVED IT!
the tense atmosphere of the group will be so much fun for you to write about and for me to read! oh yeah, I was riight I was soo riight- when do you plan on having Sesshomaru enter the picture and screw with the current situation? Great...now I'm all excited about what is going to happen in this story- thanks alot! lol
update asap RoseGlass
CrimsonCherryBlossom814
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
awsome keep up the good work and update soon!
sora
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
Eh? It is a bit too dramatic and I have a feeling that Kagome overreacted. I believe the Kagome you portrayed wouldn´t react like that. Now, I had the feeling that she was the Kagome from the beginning with Inuyasha and even then I think she would have left without making a sound *scratches her head*. I don´t know, it was a bit unrealistic to me but teenagers can be so damn dramatic sometimes.
I´ve seen your voting and I´m apalled that someone wanted to see Itachi with Rin! No! Absolutely NO! If she has to be in the story, what is unrealistic if the other humans are already dead, then she should be with someone like Kohaku. And really, how could someone like Itachi be interested in someone like Rin? That is just as bad as the Rin/Sesshoumaru pairing.
I vote for Itachi/Ino or if you accept yaoi pairings how about Sesshoumaru/Itachi *snickers* Now that would be interesting!
I don´t know how you will bring Sasuke and Hinata together. I can´t see him with someone so weird. I vote for Sasuke/Ino if Itachi could be with Sesshoumaru and then Kakashi/Anko. Just a advice: don´t try to pair everyone with someone, that is also unrealistic. Does everyone you know have a partner in real life? I don´t think so. That is a cliché I really hate in fanfiction; everyone is happy with their partners and their children are an exact replica of both their parents *puke*
StrawberryJelly14
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
This was a good chapter but its too bad that thei not together yet... maybe thats whats making me want to read it, all the SUSPENSE! O_O...
*Cough Cough* Anyway... i really cant wait for the next chapter ^-^
Puppet Master Naruto
2009-09-19 . chapter 10
Well, all great thing come in moderation, such as this story. YOU try finding a NarutoxKagome story with just as many, if not more, words/chapters than this one, and updated constantly. I can barely put up a update sometimes. For some reason, the story that everyone wants to see a 6th chapter for is the one that gives me the most problems. Even if it did take a while for an update, the 11,0 words more than makes up for it. Great chapter, and I really like the tension. It's always better when there are obstacles between where you are and what you want. Looking forward to your next chapter.
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