This is a great story!

:) I higly enjoy this story so far, so when your writers block is over please feel free to update a lot!

Aww I love this story too, though Madara really pisses me off and I usually love him...but anyways, I hope something dramatic does happen!

Fantastic chapter! UGH! MADARA! LEAVE THEM ALONE FOR ONE FREAKING CHAPTER! GOOD LORD!

I loved it thought, and I most definitely cannot wait for more!

~Paddy~

i just love love love love your story and i cant wait till the next chapter! please please please update soon!

AH! I love this story so much! Add more drama! Madara is a creepy stalker. Keep writing. This is the best AU story I've read. Ever.

yaay! yet another chapter out! and the close incounter with Madara was priceless! keep up the excellent work! and i do hope to see another chapter soon :3

Yeah...stil can't remember my password, I'll just have to get online with the other computer one of these days.

WHOA! This was an eventful chapter! Personally, I love it. Also, I think that Madara should have a serious (aka: fatal) 'accident' whilst stalking Katrina. That would solve ALL of her problems!...maybe even the whole sex thing, hmm? haha

Got a question for ya, did you always intend for Madara to be the creepy stalker dude? Even if people voted so that Itachi or Sasuke won? Because I could see that happening either way...because he's super-duper scary and I don't like him! O.O

Teehee Anyways, great chapter! Keep up the good work!

I seriously do hope that Katrina gets to go home, but what about Kakashi?? And wouldn't O'Malley have gone into further investigation of what he heard from Katrina? And how about when Katrina goes home (or at the airport) people finally see Madara for who he is and the police arrest him in public??

Just a suggestion. Anyways, I do hope you can update soon!!
~SL05

Loved the story. It kept me in suspense of what was going to happen! I wish Madara would leave them alone!

Haha enjoyed Katrina pelting paint balls at him^^

Can't wait for the next chapter!

"Wow." is right. I was so relieved when Katrina managed to keep her wits about her and knee that bastard and make her escape. For a second, I thought she might just freeze up. So sad, time for goodbyes. But yeah, either she's gonna go home and something hugely dramatic will happen or it'll happen at the airport causing her to stay. I still think Maddie will catch her there and idk, steal/revoke her passport or something. I really enjoyed the update. Unconventional dates are the best! Dinner and a movie are so over-rated. lol. Can't wait for more!

love the chapter! i dont know much about romance but how about a festival? or a japanese style renissance fair? i dunno if i spelled that right but i like it better than the festival idea! hell im surprised my hectic mind vomited it out! lolz hope to see an new chapter but i might not be able to review cause i am now living in a motel for about 2 weeks and then i have to wait to get my computer fixed and then get the internet installed in my noew house...lol oh the drama XD

Oh, I'm sure Madara was less pleased about the whole kissing; I can only imagine how furious he was! LOL, and Katrina should know about how Kakashi is by now!! Of course he's going to wait on the sex! As for the secret plan, I suck at romance, so sorry, I can't help you there!! Well, I hope you can update soon!!
~DAP

Love it. So much. :) Cannot wait for more!

~Paddy~

I love your story!! It's fricking amazing! (oh and btw i have 2 edit this as i write it. So know i think its greater than what the edited version is able to convey ;}) i really love Katrina's sassy-ness. She's really likable and reminds me of myself in the way that she's so blunt about how she says everything. Lol. It's hilarious that you mad Kakashi such a prude! :D and Madara gets on my fricking nerves. Major prick... Scratch that. He's a major PSYCHOTIC prick that is arrogant self absorbed and entirely too self confident. Well anyways, i just wanted to say that yoh are an amazing author and your story is great.

I also had an idea for where Kakashi could be taking her. He could take her to a privet (?) co-ed bath house and they can have a nice STEAMY bath there. Idk it was just an idea. Oh and sorry for any spelling errors. I can't spell worth a darn thing.

Well post again soon please and keep up the good writing!

-xlostinmyownworldx