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DitsyMuch
2009-07-11 . chapter 11
I luv ur story ^^ please update soonXD
22POP
2009-07-11 . chapter 3
your work is amazing. I truly am a fan ouran high school host club. Whenever I see people working on ouran or even complimenting it, it makes me really happy. I pray to god that ouran high school host club doesn't finish until a long time. Anyways Please keep trying and infect everybody by showing them that ouran will rise up. I bet u maight think i'm lame but i'm like a number one fan. Please continue your work because even if your work has one sentence that talks about the club, it makes me happy that you thought about it. I hope this message meant something to you and I'm not as OLD as I seem. Good luck and I hope your stories will be published in a book or as a side story of ouran in the year coming comics. Good luck!I'll be cheering for you!!
Haruka Oujo
2009-07-11 . chapter 11
I need to yell at Kaoru now- KAORU GET UR LAZ BUTT OUTTA BED AND STOP BEING IN DENIAL U IMBOSOL! ok i'm done, nekozawa really likes her though huh... showdown! Nekozawa vs Kaoru so far Nekozawa is in the lead! lol
The Cheezit Faerie
2009-07-10 . chapter 11
Oh my gosh! I loved this chapter! (Spazzes Out)

I REALLY hope that you update again sometime soon! I really like this story and would like to see more of it.

Hope you update again soon!

CF/The Cheezit Faerie
808Gansta-bookworm
2009-07-10 . chapter 11
Love this story! I was really worried that Lolita would become a Mary Sue who is ugly in the beginning but gets all prettied up later and then everyone starts to like her, but she's an OC, she has a beilevable family life and past. The story can happen in Ouran and it fits into that world, especially Tamaki being the first person she really befriends and Hikaru being very confused on Lolita and how she enters he and Karou's little world. Only thing I'm slightly worried about is the amount of guys who like Lolita, only for it might be like turn into the Mary Sues with a bunch of guys fawning over her. Though it's beilevable why Nekozawa-sempai and Kasanoda like her and it's too adorable! Karou better man up or he's gonna lose his chance to be her boyfriend!
OMG-its-a-pen
2009-07-10 . chapter 11
I forgive you! I lost a bit of inspiration for my own story too...althugh I had Anime Expo, not cosplay in general xD
Can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it has fluff!
XxstevexX
2009-07-10 . chapter 10
haha I love Sweeny Todd! My friend loves it, too. Everytime she comes over to my house, we end up watching it. Oh, and don't worry I think you've done really well with keeping them all in character from the beginning! You seem really good at that
The Cheezit Faerie
2009-05-05 . chapter 10
Wow. This fanfiction is actually REALLY good!! I LOVE this series!! I hope you update again soon!! I'm really looking forward to it! ^_^
OMG-its-a-pen
2009-05-01 . chapter 10
Oh, that was good. I was kinda hoping for more detail in Tamaki's nightmare- a.k.a. Sweeny Todd, but oh well. I admire the ability to make something so brief. When I write I put too much detail, at least in my opinion. Its not a bad thing, its just that it would help to be able to put a lot in a few words.

Anyways, enought about my writing style. I loved the ending. I don't know why but I absolutly love it when characters are confused about their feelings when it so obviously love. I guess it just makes them seem more innocent, which I find absolutly adorable.
the-clumsy-one
2009-05-01 . chapter 10
that was a nice chapter.
please update soon!
Haruka Oujo
2009-04-29 . chapter 10
o Nekozawa means it! Kaoru u better take his advice or you'll end up heart-broken!
the-clumsy-one
2009-04-15 . chapter 9
GO Kaoru!
sweep Lolita off her feet!
great story.please update soon.
CrazyAcorn
2009-04-03 . chapter 9
I KNEW IT WAS SWEENEY TODD!! *does victory dance, baloons and streamers everywhere*
This is an amazingly cool OC story, usually they turn out M-Sue (including my own >
OMG-its-a-pen
2009-04-03 . chapter 9
Mwuahaha, I can't wait to see (well, read, technically) Tamaki freak out when he sees Sweeney Todd xD To be honest, the bodies falling to the basement thingy is worse then when he slits their throats, in my opinion. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Live.Laugh.Love.Forever
2009-04-03 . chapter 9
hi i luv this story. it so funny. but a little sad. i hope u dont mind that i put it in my community archive. i think kaoru and lolita should get together. :)
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