Omigosh! so good! LOVE IT! update, and sharp edges too! great preface!

I really hope you plan to finish this story

the summary was wat caught my attention

and the preface sounds very intresting as well

great job

update soon

i like your story so far, but i have a question is everyone human or no? and i'm kinda confused about why the pianos there and why they sold the house so umm good story so far and update soon

Emmett the pizza-man. That made me laugh.

This is an interesting and original start, to be sure. The preface got me hooked and then, seeing Bella moving into the Cullen's house and everything, I'm really curious to see where this is going. I thought the characterization was good, though it was a shorter chapter so it's not easy to tell. And over all I really liked this story. I hope you update soon.

You should look at my story if you get a chance, it's called Dodging Raindrops, I'd really appreciate getting your opinion on it.

--0Rii