This is a very interesting story and I'm taking a great liking to so far which is rare since most stories put me to sleep or I skim over dull paragraphs. Maybe it's the lack of sleep talking or perhaps you truly are a good writer, I won't know until chapter two.

s'far as i can say...THIS IS GREAT! *grabs flamethrower* WHY ARENT YOU READERS REVIEWING DAMMIT?!