Ooh, intriguing. This is so full of hints and new plot lines! I can't wait to see where the next one goes!

I had forgotten about that box (we did read about it earlier yes? I feel like I did at one point...) And now we've learned all sorts of random things about it. Hmm...who exactly is he? I guess we'll eventually find out!

To the next!
-Dizgirl

Oh man this is so belated...sorry about that. Time slipped away from me these past few months.

ANYWAYS, very interesting and particularly foreboding. Oh man, the foreshadowing in this was so thick I felt like I was wading through it--and I mean that in a good way! Oh man, I got chills (wow, now I want to sing Grease...). Sounds like Europe holds some awesome and yet dangerous adventures ahead! I can't wait to see where Espionage goes!

SWEET! I won (along with Truephan!)! I'll have to PM you about that... (starts thinking)

Onto the epilogue!
-Dizgirl

Love the story keep it up!

So, this story is at a sorta end, isn't it? A very nice cliff hanger to get me hooked into still reading 'Espionage'! You cleverly evil girl, you!! Of course, I would read your next installment anyhow, since I got those cursingly desirable kazi points to let me win something for once in my life!

Some great lines in here, of course, as well as a thick slathering of mystery. Mighty tasty!

But in any case, glad you wrapped this story up...well, sorta!!

Great job of it and I'm looking forward to the next chappie of 'Espionage'. truephan

You already know this, but I heart your OCs. You do our group more justice than we do ourselves. Go Marie and Reece! And Box-Thing! Go Box-Thing!
Congrats on another excellent chapter,
TBR

DZD: WOW! Did I actually win something? But it comes with work? LOL! Well, I guess I can still save up my luck and win the lottery with it!
Anyhow, I see that you have virually dusted your hands off with this story, even with unanswered questions...like who is that guy in that suit? I even flipped back to see if somehow I missed that little detail. Maybe I did, but looks like my brain may need to have you squeeze it back out. But, perhaps, you mean to tell us in 'Espionage'? And just HOW did they manage to conk out an Ancient? I found that a whopper of a given. Especially when I secretly was GLAD that she was out of the pix for a while...I really find her very annoying--like Jar-Jar Binks, only a bit smarter.
Overall, however, I found this a very entertaining piece of literature! I just love your writing style and your imagery. Quite vivid and delicious.
Great job and I'm looking forward to 'Espionage'--even IF I'm NOT at all a fan of James Bond. Peace to you, too, and look for my PM.. truephan

truely an epic fic. I can't wait for Espionage to get into full swing. if i saw stillson on the tv, i would try to blow him up with my mind. horray for tucker and his awesome technological backup. i still wonder how they knocked obsidian out like that. and makeing obsidian be an ipod, that made me laugh. dragon in his pocket, that just sounds funny to me. and did you have to leave the end so ominous? makes it sound like danny's going to die. that would be so seriously messed up if you killed him in the last story. anyway, i look forward to the next story. later.

With the next story what general spy organization will it be a cross over with? MI6? MIB... (kidding ;) I just want to know so I can take part in that contest easier.

please update. please update.

please update.

Hey I love these stories. But I have to ask could you keep the questions clearer still so that others can figure them out?

Well, first of all, sorry I was late in reviewing. I was out-of-town a few days and just got back when I saw that you had already posted. Secondly, I’m THRILLED at this moment to get a cameo appearance in your next story, uh, right? But after reading your note on the bottom-- about those ‘gruesome details’ thing—I’m sweating a few bullets. But I’m STILL ready for my close-up, Mr. deMille!

Anyhow, time to get back to the review. And time to get the not too happy stuff over with. Even though I really loved all that transpire as far as the plot is concern, I have to say that this chapter was a tad bit unpolished —especially the first scene. I really had a hard time following what you were trying to paint in that scene. I couldn’t help but feel that you were desperate to get it out; especially when I also felt there were holes in some of the other scenes; that is, as far as making it flow is concerned.

However, not to end on any sour note, like I said, I was very happy with the body of the story as a whole. I was very relieved that Danny was rescued and your reason why he didn’t just phase out of his bonds was very clever. I am also happy that the foursome who wanted to get out of the carnival got out of the carnival unscathed. You also did a good job keeping me nerves wracked during their escape attempt. I also love the part that Danny causes that chain reaction. Very apropos for the bad guys.

And then there is my continuing curiosity about the man in the iron mask (yes, the play on words is intentional). But, darn if my brain cells are in the Dead Zone for any more guesses. Good job in keeping him mysterious and spooky at the same time. He must be a ghost, though, if he could get that much energy out of Danny! (Yes, I’m still twisting my brain cells dry on this one!)

I found it interesting that Johnny couldn’t get into his Dead Zone during this time except for the tarot card. I wonder why that happened? Was he just so stressed out that he couldn’t? Anyhow, just curious about that.

Finally, nice tension when it came to Bailey and JJ trying to reach Johnny and Danny. I’m very glad that they really didn’t do anything to help in their escape, because, quite frankly, I wasn’t sure how they were going to do that without being shot….

Overall, good job and I hope you don’t have to wait until your mid-thirties to finish this story. I might not live that long...truephan

EPIC! absolutely wonderful. your skill with a pen, er, keyboard never ceases to amaze me. your villain is superbly creepy and just a perfectly bad guy. does he have anything to do with the thing inside the box at the end of frostbite? can he read thoughts, it seemed that way when he first came face to face with johnny. and is he the one keeping obsidian out of the picture? she is going to be pissed when she wakes up. and poor johnny and danny, they both really are targets of “fate’s fickle cruelties.” and three cheers for bailey and jj for not getting killed, for managing to keep their heads, and for actually proving to be useful in the rescue.(and the comment about reece and the bike is something I would totally say. you continue to be surprisingly and almost eerily accurate with your characterization) you really are amazing. you are talented in plot construction, characterization, dialogue conception, imagery, diction variety, and throwing in some poetically crafted empirical truths. i admire your tenacity and question your sanity about the task you’ve set yourself for writing this saga. if and when you complete it, you deserve some sort of award for creativity, perseverance, and the sheer brilliance necessary to keep going for so long. another amazing chapter down, dozens more to go and I look forward to every one. i wish you the best in all your endeavors, good friends, a favorite book, and freedom for writers block.

Nope it's not over yet but at least for now they may have a small break.

My main concern now is Obsidian. Was she supressed by "Dog Bones" (heh, as Danny so aptly named the black knight) and will now be okay? If so she is gonna be so angry! XD;; Oh boy is she gonna have a tantrum.

Hmm..."Dog Bones" will pop up later I'm sure. I still can't decide if he/she is a canon character from one of these shows or your own creation. If he/she is the first I'm lost on who it could be... Suit of high tech armor...

Anyways, I'm so glad they're safe! And we're almost on to another arc. Espionage...what world are we venturing into this time? Will "Dog Bones" follow them there? Will Sam come into the picture? Hmm...

Though Vladdatron played his part in this he's kinda also been quiet. More accurately he just hasn't physically come into the picture yet, just working from the shadows. I wonder how long he shall do that. Heh, maybe he's not willing to get caught up with Obsidian again (snickers).

I want to compliment you yet again on how beautiful your writing is. I really love the way you describe things some times. You just have a very unique way of going about it and I love it!

Till the next!
-Dizgirl

I'm truly loving every chapter of this story arc. Obsidian is completely awesome, and the plots are unique, believable, and totally amazing. I was addicted to Static Shock for a couple of years before I latched onto DP, and that crossover always makes me happy. I've never seen Dead Zone, but looked it up when this fic started just to get an idea of what was going on. Your portrayals and descriptions of the characters make it very easy to follow, even for someone who's never seen the show. Kudos for doing such a fabulous job, and I can't wait for more!