Aww, how sweet! You've got the two perfectly in character. A very cute little piece. Good job!

This was so great! You have those two down to a tee and it was so funny to see Arthur getting jealous and not being able to understand his contradictory feelings!

Thanks for sharing!

AW! I loved this! Arthur jealous and not even realizing it.

Ah, the joys of courtly love. It just exists for people to poke fun at, doesn't it.

this is so good! I LOVE IT! I love Arthur/Morgana and their bickering, teasing and denial kind of relationship. You wrote them so perfectly and so in character. I can totally hear Bradley James (Arthur)'s voice in this. Good job!! me love it like a lot!

Dude, I don't even watch the show, and I love this.
Is this BBC or something?

I love this.

Oh, Arthur/Morgana - why so doomed?

This was brilliant - so in character. And the repetition of "It's Morgana" was... great. Arthur probably thinks exactly like that. :D

Aww, jealous Arthur makes me laugh.

Really really love this! The banter between Morgana and Arthur is awesome! Are you planning on writing any more? Cos I'd love it if you did! x

Oh I love this! I really wish you'd carry this on to be a full story. I love Arthur's denial - you right him really well!

Very funny. I love how Arthur is in such denial. I think that you captured his perspective well, and I especially liked the floppy stomach bit.

This is such a sweet story, and quite amusing. Oh, Arthur. I think this works very well for how Arthur might have made the transition from thinking of Morgana as a companion to an actual girl who may be attractive. Plus, the title is awesome.

Very amusing. I'm really getting into Merlin at the moment so it was a nice surprise to find your fanfic while I'm waiting for the next episode.

Lol! The image of Arthur getting walloped over the head with his own sword is something i fing unbearably funny hee hee. Great start, I'd love to see where you go with this!

Isis