Very interesting story. Good job.

I like this take on Potterverse vampires. It can be hard to weave in something about which we're not given in-universe detail; a lot of vampire!fic comes off feeling out of place. And Tobias as a vampire -- what an interesting notion!

A very interesting story. Thank You. That One Shot was very good, but I think it really needs a multi-chaptered Sequel.

--Lilith Kayden