i think i ** love you for this.

No! somebody killed Chalene Edwards! no wonder Nightwing fell!
...Oh yeah, and Thomas and Martha Wayne must be shocking too.
;P

I knew it was gonna have something to do with the Wayne's murders! Nice Job.

You have a true gift for getting into all of the characters' heads and souls - this is right up there with NML, and a lot of my favorite Bat-character storylines for sheer scope and skill in telling the story. I'm sorry you're "retired" from the Bat fandom - but I'm glad you wrote for it... you're a level to aspire to for me - just like Dannell, Charlene, Peggie, Smitty, and so many others I've met and come to admire in Bat-fic fandom.

Good luck in all you do from here!

Tracey

I intended to wait till the end to review your story - but HAD to comment... I haven't laughed like this in a while - nice choice of "victims" there... I hate you're "retired" but wanted to say that I admire the work you do and have done... I hope you went pro, you should...

Still in long hiatus due to real life, but working on it,

Tracey

This was brilliantly written, well thought out, and you had the characterization down well. I commend you for a great job done. It is one of the best I have read. You do a great job of balancing everything, including the emotions of Bruce and Dick. I especially liked the lectures Alfred gave Bruce. He had it coming, I suppose. I also liked the last scene and how Dick stopped Bruce from killing that man... it spoke volumes. I loved it all. This will most definitely go in my favorites!! Wonderful job!!

Dear Jim,
This Story in all of its various chapters is stunning outstanding amazing and some of the best Batclan fanfic that I have ever read. You've done your history keeping it in line with the continuity (see Batman the ultimate evil if you don't already know about it even if you had changed the circumstances.) Well well Done!
I wish I could send this to them. because it is just that good.

BRAVO! BRAVO! Very impressive and stunning!

Holy crap-ola!! Go Alfred, rock on with your bad self!

Qoute:

Roy sighed, his anger getting the best of him. “Do you see a uniform on me? We’re incognito, remember?” He started emptying his pockets. “I’ve got a comb, 47 cents in change, some lint, and a couple condoms. Unless you’re MacGyver, I don’t think this stuff’ll be useful.”

LMAO

Great story! Glad Dick wasn't the one who kiled that guy and that he was there to remind Bruce not to kill the other one. Keep up the great work!!

I can not tell you how long I have awaited the ending of this story and as always it was well worth the wait. You are one of the most awesome writers I have ever read and I missed you these last couple of years. I hope this means you will be back again... soon. BRAVO

This is a very cool story. I really like it and am putting it in my c2 archive and putting you on my author alerts.

Wow.
This story was amazing- from the action, the storyline, the knowledge of police work and your indepth understanding of the characters. The idea was original and was performed flawlessly, without become melodramatic. In short, this was incredible and I was riveted to my seat, biting my nails and daring to read on, until I reached the conclusion. You have done the story justice and I can't wait to read more!

THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY! WELL THOUGHT OUT AND YOU REALLY GOT INTO THE FEELINGS OF FATHER AND SON! JUST ADDED YOU TO MY FAVORITES AND CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK-BRAVO!