|Reviews for The Screens|
| When Dreams Become Reality 1/9/13 . chapter 3
This needs a sequel... Or follow up chapter... Or SOMETHING. It's too good to be only 3 chapters...
| StrangelyClose 5/4/10 . chapter 3
So, thats how roibin turned evil, mh great idea, and for the first time in this time of deaviating Robin stories, great argument, however i think taht you made some plotholes
1.- Ypou could have expanded more the subject, i mean this is very well but is jsut like a resumé of the real story
2.- Slade is a little OC, too condescendant and nice
3.- You killed BB, i mean he was still sure that robin would return and he went to serach him, but also now that i think about it when you are mad you dotn think clearly
3.- NIce touch, the speedy thing
4.- And thats pretty much all
PLEASE A SEQUAL A SEQUAL PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE A SEQUAL
The sequal, i mena the argument is 10 times more worth than this, lest take this ff like the intro kay?
Ha, sorry i was just excited
Upadate SON, hahaha jsu a reference to one fo your reviews
| Somewhere In Time 11/20/08 . chapter 3
Okay...that was...sudden. But within Robin's action boundaries, so I guess it's alright.
And sorry for the ghastly typo I made last review...I meant update SOON, not update SON. -_-;; I can just see you staring at my review and going "WTF!" Yeah, sorry about that...;;
| Destenys Angel Pyra 11/19/08 . chapter 3
This is the last chapter?
This story became in this chapter really good,if you have any idea
for another chapter please write it down,
| kobez2.0 11/19/08 . chapter 3
I gotta be honest. I don't feel like the character development was there to justify Robin killing the Titans. And I think it would have had more of an impact to set this chapter a week or two after the last one, and have Slade pick up on changes in Robins demenor, then do the big reveal ("I killed someone". OMG!).
On the whole it was a fantastic story, it just felt a little rushed to me. I look forward to seeing more.
| Somewhere In Time 11/13/08 . chapter 2
Poor Robin though. He should just kidnap Star and explain in top speed what's going on or something of the sort...but then I'm just obsessed with happy endings. :D
| kobez2.0 11/13/08 . chapter 2
Good update. You've done an excellent job of showcasing the shift in Robin's personality without making it seem forced. I look forward to seeing Robin continue to slip into the darkness. Just one question though. What does Batman have to say about all this?
| KF fan 11/13/08 . chapter 2
Good chapter. It's quite easy to see Robin as jealous, isn't it?
| KF fan 11/13/08 . chapter 1
Hmm. I usually only read Flinx stories but this is well done.
| Wynja 11/13/08 . chapter 2
WOHA! Angsty, much...? Poor Robin! How the heck is this going to turn out? Well? What are you sitting around for? TELL ME!
| Wynja 11/11/08 . chapter 1
Hi-ya! I like it... Robin is starting to warp and he's just on the edge... that makes it all the more interesting, I think... also interesting to see the Titan's reactions! Can't wait for the next two chapters!
| JazRox 11/11/08 . chapter 1
UPDATE soon, I love apprentice flicks
| Toriano.Flacko 11/10/08 . chapter 1
Oh boy. This can't be good(I'm speaking of the story status, not how it's going to be. How things will finally turn out for Robin.)... Great.
| xkNightx 11/10/08 . chapter 1
That was really good. You had a few mistakes and Robin seemed kinda odd when he was talking to Slade (Master?). Anyway, you captured Robin's thoughts really well. Update.
| JazzyFan 11/10/08 . chapter 1
Hmm..In my opinion, Robin is OOC, but then again, I really don't care for a servile Robin. Besides that and a few grammar improvements, you did a good job. :)