Hmm...what a pairing. You know for a moment, I thought it was Camille Leon. I was happy to see it wasn't her, though. This was quite fun. I can't wait for your next story. Happy Turkey Day! Hasta...

You're confused? That makes two of us! I suppose you'll clear this up in the next chapter...or so I hope. Wouldn't do me any good walking about more confused than usual. So, onto the next chapter and hopefully things clear up.

Didn't take long to guess who they were this time, and my guesses based on last chapter would have been wrong. Interesting match-up, and good writing. Lynn suffering from her past hard life, and Shego worrying Kim could go same way, physically, good characterization.

That was... weird.

Don't misunderstand -your story telling, characters, dialog, and powers of mystery all rocked. It's no mean feat to carry on meaningful and well-written dialog between characters when you don't know who the other half are.

Tara and Adrena Lynn?

My mind can't wrap itself around that non-sequitur.

Good, but weird.

Tara and Adrena Lynn... together?

I didnt see that one coming.

It is Fr-EAKY! indeed.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

huu.. what in the what now. if your confused were in the world dose tat put me

I'd guess, and be wrong, and my self-esteem would be shot, so I'll just wait for the next chapter when you hopefully clear up that confusion of yours.

YOU are confused? That makes two of us man!

Just what in the hell happened here?

Invader Johnny Sining Off.

You're not the only one who's confused...

o_O

You better have a damn good explanation for this, dude. All these "forms" and "figures" are confusing the hell out of me. You're only getting the story alert 'cause I trust you not to suck. Don't let me down, now! ;)

Heh. I'm curious to see who the two women are (though, given the kind of games you've depicted KiGo as sharing in your stories, I'm not sure that Kim should have that much trouble adjusting to the new 'sitch', now she knows what it is).

The use of the word 'lanky' makes me think the tall woman might be Justine Flanner.

Oh... K? I'm a little confused, to the point of WTF!?

I haven't a clue who or what is going on. There's a goodly number of possible perps who could be our mysterious tall and short woman.

Lovely to see a new work, though. I'm looking forward to some answers with a healthy dose of clarity.