I think this is a lovely beginning to a great tale and I look forward to more chapters. *hands out carrots to plot bunnies*

A lovely tale of friendship! I hope I see more of this series (I hope) I especially liked the kings fond memories of the past. I also enjoyed the little conspiracy between Legolas and Eldarion. My favorite part however, was the evidence of friendship and memory when when Legolas started and finished the same tale that Aragorn was thinking of writing.

Well done Sivan Shemesh! Well done! :)

I hope for Aragorn's sake and his son's too that the lad doesn't come down with a cold. A mother's wrath over letting something like that happen is best to be avoided at all costs! ;)

Dín

Very cute! And Aragorn's writer's block is something most of us can relate to! :)

aw that was sweet.maybe you should do another chapter with their first meeting and stuff...:)

Cute story with hidden meaning. Love this part it is very wise.

"Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten"

The song was very fitting, the story beautiful.

~Cal