Update? Pretty please? :D

Wow, this could turn out to be very interesting. I'm looking forwards to the next chapter!

I love how Relena's character is developed. Not many people actually try to develop her much, but I really like this! I can't wait for the next chapters.

Off to a good start! I'll be waiting for more :)

please continue on with the story i want to know what happens next it's really good keep it up

bravo, i love the pessimistic relena, she seems so human. keep it up :)

-lil

Good start, I can't wait to read more. It will be great to have well developed Relena based story. :)

Nice, I appreciate your take n Relena. So many people enjoy to keep her character stunted or the villian of sorts. Thanks for your work!

Its an interesting start. I like it. Can't wait til the next chapter!
-Animeguera-

I'm so glad you've taken on GW fandom... it's addictive. And because this is really good to see because of the maturity with which it's written. I think some of that comes from the perspective you're trying to develop through Relena's POV-- which is amazing, I might add-- and from the story you're starting to flesh out. I'm all for these complex mission-fics.

This is not an original set-up, what with the death threat, rebels, the Preventers, and a mission underway-- but I get the feeling that this one is going to stand out.

Note: You're portrayal of Relena is really exciting, as I have grown weary of the ones that keep alot of her juvenile characteristics around even when she's an adult. To see a fabulous example of a really well developed Relena, take a look at Occam's Razor, by Tynan if you haven't already.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is a bit crazy, Quatre says her death would end the era of peace, and yet Duo seems to propose they fake her death. The only thing I can't really wrap my head around is Relena calling her brother Zechs in her mind, just seems more sibling like for her to think of him as Milliardo. That's a personal preference though, not like it's going to stop my reading. :)

Hmm, interesting. I agree with you on that Relena isn't really develored as a character in many fanfics. Also, I like this chapter, you opened up the story well, giving enough information to keep your audience's attention and make us curious enough to stick around to see what happens next. All in all not bad. I'm hanging around to see what you come up with next. ^_^

seems really interesting and well written too ;) I hope you won't keep us waiting too long for next chap ^_^ now I'm just curious to see where it goes. please update asap!
kisses

Interesting plot. I have to tell you i really like it. I hope you will update soon because I wonder what it's going to happen... “It is simple.” I turned around at the sound of the new voice and was greeted by short wave from the ponytail wearing Gundam pilot. I highly doubted that anything out of Duo Maxwell’s mouth would be simple. He wore that mischievous knowing grin on his face: a clear sign of disaster. “The rebels can’t pose a death threat against you…” He paused for affect and it worked. “…if you’re already dead.”

I wonder what they 're going to do. Hope to update soon! You've just earned another reader of your story.

i like havent seen gundam wing but this sounds really cool