O.O

OMG. That was utterly awesome! :3 The ending, hee hee; smart move, Kairi.

FF009

wow. that was so amazing
I really love your style of writing... and I could imagine the whole story to the smallest detail as you described it
kudos to you!

i liked it. i thought the ending was good :D

Oh, how I love AkuKai...

I very much love the little plot behind this. And GO KAIRI. FORGET SORA! BWAHAHAHA! Hmph. If I saw Axel running about, I'd ditch the hottest guy in the world to go chase after the sexy pyro. If only he were real...

Beautiful story, can't wait to see more from you. ;)