Beautiful read

Beautiful fic.

I LOVE IT
LOVE LOVE LOVE

woah. Amazing. I really loved this! Excellent job. The transition from 'I meant it' to 'I did' made such an impact! Please keep writing Bellatrix fanfics (you're awesome at them!) And update Bella, Love as soon as you can ( I LOVE that story!) thx, you rock.

~AT

Interesting! That could go either way really, couldn't it? Rodolphus to Bellatrix or Bellatrix to the Dark Lord. It kind of reminded me of a song actually (wow, a poem that's similiar in any way to a song? Genius observation, I'm sure . .*rolls eyes*)

You know what I mean anyway, I'm sure. I liked the repetition of "when I said" and the twist on the last verse balanced it nicely. Hmm. The more I think about it, the more I think it's probably Rod to Bella.

Anyway. Was this your first attempt at poetry, or poem-fics, or whatever we call them? It was good if it was. Really original - I don't think I've ever seen anything like this before, and that's a good thing!

Anyway, I'll try to reveiw more before Friday (D-day!). I should sleep now, it's 4am . . .

Bye for now!

I liked the poem as I think it describes Bella and her feelings towards Voldemort or her husband. Thanks for writing.

Wow, the last section was haunting!

Aw... I luffses it. ♥

wow, this is really deep. its defo one of the best poems i've read and yh it could go with bellatrix and voldemort too
i liked it, good job x

I loved this, especially the ending. It has a bittersweet, hopeless romantic kind of flavor. You're right, this could be from Rodolphus to Bellatrix or Bellatrix to Voldemort, and rereading it, I have no idea which it is.

Woah I love it!

This is really good. I really like it. The phrase 'I meant it' is really effective, It is also quite emotional too!

I personally think that it would suit Bella and Voldy. I don't know why. I think it is because I am just obsessed with that pairing. (Though in my opinion, they do actually quite suit)
I don't normally like reading poems, but this is fantastic! Maybe if you have time do another one.
Hope you are doing ok? And your fics are doing great.
From Sarah x