Very good and sweet. Not to mention, interesting. I liked it a lot.

You know the fairy-tale thing is overdone?!
Fairy-tales can NEVER be overdone :D. I really loved it!

I enjoy all those fairy tales and loved the story!

cute=)

thats sweet

aww swet :)

Hi there.Nice...Im not really competent on critics,but im capable enough on compliment..Hehe
Urs were nice,the idea seemed fresh..U made it well done.
Keep writing! m_m

nice...really loved the diff fairy tales =D

aw thats cute!

aw :D this is so cute :D great job

That was so deliciously sweet! I loved it!

Why are you such a fantastic writer?
Because I immensly loved this!

the cliche part i didn't mind too much, but the fairy tales did get a bit overboard
the interactions are still cute dough, so it's all good.

incredibly wonderful is the right word for Edward.
he's gorgeous, charming, delicious, strong, powerful, devoted, possessive, AND a villain (in the traditional sense anyways)
i dont think any girl can say no to that package
hence the sigh-ing continues

Aw, so sweet! Very nice, excellent writing, if a slightly formulaic plot.

That was so sweett! I love your writing!