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Nice chapter, I specifically liked Goo's analysis skills when she was looking at the picture, (long lost descendant of Sherlock Holmes?) I also like the fact that she competently bilingual, nice touch with the Japanese phrase. I think Jake's...well...annoying. But that's only cause I think he's trying to get closer to Goo. (I'm pretty biased when it comes to the GooxMac stuff lol.)

good chapters...and yes it was worth the wait...well im guesing ur gonna do a mac chappie next so cant wait... well anyways update asap=)

Actually, I think it was worth the wait; I enjoyed it a lot. You're keeping Goo very much in character, being random and playful in one scene, and emotional in the next.

I absolutely LOVE THIS STORY! Will you ever return to it? If not can I finish it, I like this idea but I didn't think anybody could execute the storyline as well as you have, VERY NICE STORY!

Kind of cute and clever, bringing Louise into the story like this (and she still has Cheese, at her age? :D) I can't remember having read any fanfics with her before.

I'm still not very interested in your OCs, but I'm beginning to warm up to them a little.

wow Goo being quiet for a week... powerful. Jacob seems to be a real prick. the way the yelling and fighting ended was awsomely awkward... Jacob likes it rough. very enjoyable. Always on the PS3.

enjoyable. I love this story. chocolate bunnies... I could see it all. haha! Always on the PS3.

omg...i like this please update asap...mac is so sweet

good chapter. wow Mac is really depressed; he needs help... he needs Goo. I am intrigued and must read more. Always on the PS3.

If Goo is being so quiet, she must be taking this pretty badly. Still, it's good to see that she manages after all. Another well written chapter!

Was Jacob never able to create imaginary friends?

Heh, heh. The chocolate episode reminds me of an idea I used once. But mine wasn't as creative, nor as juicy. Great work, all around!

Hola! I have to say, this story seems interesting. It has a kind of balance to it, something that is hard for most to obtain. I'd like to see where this story goes.
On a side note: I LOLed at the Heroes reference :P
-Zaang

This is still great stuff.

And I'd like to see a chapter from Terrence's POV; good idea

Good story I liked it. Keep it up :)

Peace and love: J.M Manucy aka iluvBlooQKazoo