I WUV YOU!

ahahahahaha...

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~*Kris*~

Christ, this was like... really powerful. The emotion was apparent in every word. I love this, seriously, it just blew me away.

I love you.
I…love you.
Iloveyou.
I love you?

Ah! So adorable how Drake super-freaks that Josh said "I love you" even though he doesn't mean it the way he wants him to. Gaah!

Aw, this was just, aw. Made me hurt a bit inside. Poor angsty!Drake. *sniff*

~Sunny

Aww this is so sad! =( But also a good story!=)

OH!
:D
I just realized that Josh's name isn't mentioned till the end.
Nice little detail, there.

This is my favorite part.
"I love you.
I…love you.
Iloveyou.
I love you?"
I don't really know why. I...I think that's a perfect set of letters. Like, I feel as though it's perfect. o:

Very nice use of second person. :3

You've got a few grammatical errors, though.
You kept using 'your' as opposed to 'you're'.

And, there was this:

"could sit him aflame"

I think you meant 'set'.

"could set him aflame"

:]

Aw. So sad! I wish there could be a happier ending--for the boys and for you.