|Reviews for Falling Action|
| TekJounin 6/5/09 . chapter 4
I really enjoyed the story until I slammed right into the wall. No update? Ever?
| Silver-Heart377 6/1/09 . chapter 4
luv this story! very touching chapter, please update soon!
| The Disappeared 4/15/09 . chapter 4
Augh! NO! SAKURA! SASUKE! Oh, the angst! Granted, I was warned ahead of time, but I still manage to be surprised. I'm an optimist like that. Which is why I'm hoping Naruto or Kakashi will kick some sense into him! Keep writing, PLEASE! I want to know what happens next!
| kool.kat 4/11/09 . chapter 4
okay...omg! that was the best...okay, i've been looking for some really good stories recently. one's that are really good written by talented authors. i haven't found any until now. i've read all the chapters so far and they are truly AMAZING! ur writing skills are so...so...descriptive and wonderful. i feel like i'm in the story and i truly thank you for letting me read some of ur wonderful writing. i think ur POV of sasuke is beautiful! i'm not that good at describing his feelings or showing things from his POV. out of all the pieces i've been reading, yours is by far the best. the one's that i have read are...not that great. so in conclusion:
YOUR WORK IS AWESOME!
| SCB2011 3/25/09 . chapter 4
I really like this story.
It's well done.
I hope you continue.
| FlowersN'stars 3/22/09 . chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY!how sad!
excellent job!continue soon :)
| heeyyy-C 3/21/09 . chapter 4
this is so cute slash sad!
please update soon!
| you.broke.a.promise 3/19/09 . chapter 4
| Xecko 3/17/09 . chapter 4
ack, u have to update D:
you can't leave us on this sad note T-T
CLIFFHANGER! T-T .. WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO THEM? I WANNU KNOW!
| Terrified of Logic 3/12/09 . chapter 1
i loved it! i kept reading all throughprep detention... lolz, detention isnt so bad afterall ;) hehe
great chapters and good sentence fluency, some mistakes but is to be expected.
| dances.with.sunflowers 3/11/09 . chapter 4
Aw, /so/ sad. But quite wonderful. I really enjoyed reading and of course, I wish you had another chapter up so maybe I could leave my end review on a lighter chapter. _ And the last lines have been consistently great. I love that. Great job and good luck on the next chapter! I hope you update soon!
| dances.with.sunflowers 3/11/09 . chapter 3
It's so sweet. *cue aw* And Sasuke is really in-character, so good job on that ;)
| dances.with.sunflowers 3/11/09 . chapter 2
:) Very entertaining, deary. The diction and wording's very easy to read. _
| dances.with.sunflowers 3/11/09 . chapter 1
Wowzas. I can tell you first wrote it as a one-shot, because of the style, but I /love/ the plot. Sticking around for more. Later :)
| Sakura 8D 3/10/09 . chapter 4
AGH! Please update soon. A horrible place to cut off...