 ooo a jellybean 2/24/10 . chapter 1haha i love the burping game! that was a good line. :D nice job! |
 SPNAngel16 1/10/10 . chapter 1lmao i could never imagine professor chuckles saying that. you've got me hooked on that game |
 I-Love-Kyro 12/21/09 . chapter 1LMAO |
 PaigeyLou 11/7/09 . chapter 1LOL...I didn't quite get it at first but then my dirty mind kicked in. lol. that was great! |
 jeanwolverine52895 5/15/09 . chapter 1lol so freakin funny |
 PhoenixCrystal 5/4/09 . chapter 1This is hilarious! I want to play that game... as long as I can never be last! I can just picture Logan burping and then someone randomly yelling a color from, like, 100 yards away. That would be so funny... |
 WatsonandMary4ever 4/22/09 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Mistress Hikari 4/4/09 . chapter 1rofl that's awsome! were'd u get the idea because it totally rocks! |
 Rachel 1/6/09 . chapter 1 Haha, that's amazing. |
 bluedragon1836 12/27/08 . chapter 1dude, I should totally start that with my cousins. The boys would love it! |
 LiRA 11/13/08 . chapter 1 *dies laughing
Flipping hilarious mate. |
 RogueOnFire 11/11/08 . chapter 1man, oh Man! I thought it was kind of humorous as the story progressed. But as soon as I saw Logan say that Charles lost the game, I threw my arm over my eyes and just laughed. Then I continued to read. That's awesome! Could I ask you nicely to write another one where charles (somehow) starts a similar game and it backfires on Logan? Truth or dare and Logan wears a dress complete with stilettos, makeup and curls? Maybe I'm asking too much, but this was a classic! M, Charles' response really didn't make me laugh, though. It's okay, it's the idea that he had to finish the game that cracks me up!
RogueOnFire |
 DanceswithElvis 11/11/08 . chapter 1 No concrit here, sorry for that; but this had me laughing, thank you for brightening up a sick day.) |
 arikgs 11/11/08 . chapter 1a few gramor errors but it was an awesome story and it tought me a new game. |