That was very good. Lots of twists and surprises. I think that you could have expanded on it a little more, but it was still good.

I like the idea that Langer didn't really die. Great story!

Hi,I like your story. it's a good alternate version of the events in cloak/dagger. Poor Michelle was really freaked by Langer's phone calls. I know their characters were only minor parts, but I would have liked to see more Michelle / Palmer eps.

I like especially the way Langer gets Lee to confess & then repeat what she said through the door so Gibbs and the others can hear her incriminate herself.

The spent blood pack was a great idea.

regards,

TimBo.

Oh, I really like your twists with this, great story! And YAY for Langer!

Is this over? I admit I was a bit confused at the Palmer switching with Langer thing? But it is early lol. Love Langer, really hope he comes back tonight! Take care.

Ah

I like this.

Langer not dead.

Michele and Jimmy going down for their crimes.

Ziva able to Langer leer some more.

Good one!