love it!
sorry I couldn't read it earlier but I went camping anyways this is brilliant!
Not as funny as the other chapter but I think it's better because the other one was more silly and if it carried on like that I would have lost interest so try to keep it like this. Also it was good because the story really moved on in this chapter and I also got a better look at the charictures emotions here but it may be better if you go a bit more into detail of them.

Anyways great job! *gives cookie*

And anyone who wants more information on before crisis or the characters featured in this fic, I’d be glad to give you the link, also any suggestions for future chapters are welcome

I'm interested...

Good fic, btw. There really aren't that many fics on the bc turks. :(

This is brilliant and it's gonna be so funny. I can tell.
Anyways great job. Please get the next chapter up quickly. Pretty please with cherries on top?