 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-06-18 . chapter 2That girl just can't take no for an answer. What a bitch (was is Sakura? lol). Great fic. |
 MoshiMoshiQueen 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Great chapter. I really hope it all works out. |
 TheDemonQueen1 2009-03-06 . chapter 2That was a really great story. I loved the way you pulled them into our world. I must say I can't help but wonder if the woman was Sakura. The only thing I can think of that would make this story *pauses trying to come up with what to say* not better per say, but maybe answer some questions for us as readers would be to let us in on Sasu's world a little bit. We don't know what he does what Naru does, who this girl is. I also think you could make this idea into a really long fic describing how they work hard to overcome this woman, and his family. Of course these are just suggestions. This was a good story. Ja ne! |
 ForgottenPassword 2009-02-18 . chapter 2You know, I actually teared up reading this. It's so damn sad. One thing bothers me a little though. Naruto just seems to forgive Sasuke after he comes home at 6 in the morning with lipstick and whatnot and all Sasuke says is if you cry I'll cry too. I'd think Naruto would want a thorough explaination besides 'I stayed with her because she was drunk. And she kissed me on the cheek for thanks'. Maybe if you continue it, or make a sequel it'd clear it up? ^_^ but this story is phenomenol and I LOVE it. Keep up the fantastic writing. |
 RiceRiceBabyRice 2009-02-16 . chapter 2That story is so heart wrenchingly sweet. I was really wondering and second guessing Sasuke's loyalty and was held in suspense while reading, Hoping like mad Sasuke wouldn't crush naruto's feelings xD. I love it when i read a story I can emphasize with and this story is just so stunning and well written. Looking forward to reading more of your future works! ;D |
 Cheska 2009-02-04 . chapter 2I admit, that if I was Naruto... I don't think I could believe Sasuke's reasoning and excuses. *shrugs* |
 purechidori 2009-02-03 . chapter 2Beautiful story! You're an amazing author! I almost cried, every emotion is so believable and real. I love your work!
~ Ryuk-chan |
 MrsHellman 2009-01-12 . chapter 2It's always Naruto in your stories, isn't it? I love to read ansty storeis, so you're one of my fav authors! :D
~mi |
 Aisho Ren 2008-12-28 . chapter 2Awe. |
 Aisho Ren 2008-12-28 . chapter 1Poor Naruto. He's so insecure. |
 Cheetah192119 2008-12-19 . chapter 2That was so awesome. I thoruoughly enjoyed the story. It was well written and to me a fresh way of writing a onseshot for SasuNaru. I love the handle of personalities. You kept the jist of their personalities even while they were in a relationship and gave an insight on what a relationship between the two could become. Very convincing to me. I applaud you. Thank you for writing this. Well...Ja ne! Adeui! Ciao! |
 lala 2008-11-29 . chapter 2 sasuke is a shithead! screw naruto for putting up with that shit! |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2008-11-27 . chapter 2Nice story! |
 Sans Fire 2008-11-21 . chapter 2so wait, sasuke better not have slept with anyone but naruto because otherwise I will flame him to an inch of his life, like I did with Sakura, though I actually killed her. |
 noname00 2008-11-19 . chapter 2 Nice fic^^ |