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MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-06-18 . chapter 2
That girl just can't take no for an answer. What a bitch (was is Sakura? lol). Great fic.
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Great chapter. I really hope it all works out.
TheDemonQueen1
2009-03-06 . chapter 2
That was a really great story. I loved the way you pulled them into our world. I must say I can't help but wonder if the woman was Sakura. The only thing I can think of that would make this story *pauses trying to come up with what to say* not better per say, but maybe answer some questions for us as readers would be to let us in on Sasu's world a little bit. We don't know what he does what Naru does, who this girl is. I also think you could make this idea into a really long fic describing how they work hard to overcome this woman, and his family. Of course these are just suggestions. This was a good story. Ja ne!
ForgottenPassword
2009-02-18 . chapter 2
You know, I actually teared up reading this. It's so damn sad. One thing bothers me a little though. Naruto just seems to forgive Sasuke after he comes home at 6 in the morning with lipstick and whatnot and all Sasuke says is if you cry I'll cry too. I'd think Naruto would want a thorough explaination besides 'I stayed with her because she was drunk. And she kissed me on the cheek for thanks'. Maybe if you continue it, or make a sequel it'd clear it up? ^_^ but this story is phenomenol and I LOVE it. Keep up the fantastic writing.
RiceRiceBabyRice
2009-02-16 . chapter 2
That story is so heart wrenchingly sweet. I was really wondering and second guessing Sasuke's loyalty and was held in suspense while reading, Hoping like mad Sasuke wouldn't crush naruto's feelings xD. I love it when i read a story I can emphasize with and this story is just so stunning and well written. Looking forward to reading more of your future works! ;D
Cheska
2009-02-04 . chapter 2
I admit, that if I was Naruto... I don't think I could believe Sasuke's reasoning and excuses. *shrugs*
purechidori
2009-02-03 . chapter 2
Beautiful story! You're an amazing author! I almost cried, every emotion is so believable and real. I love your work!

~ Ryuk-chan
MrsHellman
2009-01-12 . chapter 2
It's always Naruto in your stories, isn't it? I love to read ansty storeis, so you're one of my fav authors! :D

~mi
Aisho Ren
2008-12-28 . chapter 2
Awe.
Aisho Ren
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
Poor Naruto. He's so insecure.
Cheetah192119
2008-12-19 . chapter 2
That was so awesome. I thoruoughly enjoyed the story. It was well written and to me a fresh way of writing a onseshot for SasuNaru. I love the handle of personalities. You kept the jist of their personalities even while they were in a relationship and gave an insight on what a relationship between the two could become. Very convincing to me. I applaud you. Thank you for writing this. Well...Ja ne! Adeui! Ciao!
lala
2008-11-29 . chapter 2
sasuke is a shithead! screw naruto for putting up with that shit!
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2008-11-27 . chapter 2
Nice story!
Sans Fire
2008-11-21 . chapter 2
so wait, sasuke better not have slept with anyone but naruto because otherwise I will flame him to an inch of his life, like I did with Sakura, though I actually killed her.
noname00
2008-11-19 . chapter 2
Nice fic^^
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