i think it's Ken! a'course i like that pairing alot. wonderful fic. i love angst. _ will there be a sequal? i also really really liked the last line! ugh... i suck at reviews, well i still though it was a good read. -CTnM

Hm. Interesting. I like the imagery at the beginning. Being a major Yohji x Aya fan, I felt like it was somewhat Yo-ya at first, but by the middle, it felt like RanKen. Interesting, definitely.

it's nice it really is...Aya seems to be sometimes out of characters but it makes the story moreinteresting, and it's cool the comparisson of the rain and the tears

I think this is Omis POV and I also think this was really good. I don't really like yaoi but this one I really did like.

Very well done!

I like the angst and conflicting feelings felt by the 'mystery' main character cocerning his thoughts on Aya. I'd like to see a continuation, maybe?

Do keep writing, you definitely have style!-K. Firefly

Because every story needs a review!"Why do fireflies have to die so soon?" Setsuko from Grave of the Fireflies

That's freaky! I like it! Write more! Encore! Encore!