I like it! I think it would be interesting, though, if you included a companion piece of Brennan's thoughts either at the scene or afterward. I know she doesn't show her emotions practically ever, but I don't think that she's totally unaffected. Rather, she just doesn't let anyone know that she is affected.

How is it possible that this is fluffy despite being so sad? Is fluffy even the right word? I don't know, but it gave me that aww/*sob* feeling at the end of it.

It's short and sweet, yet still delivers in true Amanda Ruth style. :)

Great job.

Wow! This is really good! It's so short. I honestly didn't expect something so short to ever come from you but honestly I'm pretty sure you're damn good at short too. :) This is hands down my fovorite Bones piece you've ever written. It's actually so good I'm kinda thinking about putting it on my favorites list and I think I'm going to when I'm done writing this review.

You said you wanted to write about snow! I'm glad you got the chance to pen this idea out. You weren't kidding when you said that it was a good idea. If I'd have known snow would have produced this I would have let it be part of my challenge so that I could take some sort of credit for this resulting.

It blows my "Frozen" out of the water. Here I thought I had a pretty good piece out there that was inspired by snow and now I realize I have a long way to go. A very long way indeed. This was so incredible. Honestly, I wish I could write something even close to as good as this.

You, my friend, are amazing.

Really. I love it.

-Kat

that was good loved it even though it was sad

Very nice insight to Booth
(We all knew he was a softie at heart).

Good Work!