great story update!

Will this be a mahado/seto kaiba pairing? If it is, I will love you for life!

Interesting story. I'm surprised I didn't come across it sooner. I'd love to see it continue, but I have to say that the last section, at the end could use some clarification.

First off, I wasn't really sure where they were or who was in the tent to start out with and who came in after. And I'm still not sure whether or not Yami and Atem have already merged. The other thing I noted, wad that Atem was very out of character. He's never really been the emotional type. Even if he'd lost it for a moment in front of Kaiba, I'd kind of expected him to pull himself together in front of other people. Still over all, it was an interesting start, so I'm looking forward to it continuing.

This sounds very interesting! I'd love to read more and find out whats going to happen. To be honest, this chapter has been sitting in my inbox for awhile and ive only just now got the chance to read it XD Im glad ive done so. There were some spelling errors, but you did say this wasnt beated, so therefore you're forgiven, lol.

I would like to read more. I hope to read the next chapter soon! ^-^