 x nihilo 2009-07-14 . chapter 2Interesting reflections on one of the scariest men in Bleach-dom. |
 uniquecero(too lazy to log in) 2009-04-18 . chapter 2 i'm glad you finally updated again I like this story and the way you write
for the next chapter why not have him ask Nemu for help on his inventors block? |
 Redblade 2009-04-06 . chapter 2If I had just a little bit more, (say, a couple of chapters) of information about your ability to spin words I would happily declare you a genius. Honestly. ^^
Your style is smooth and minimalistically refreshing, and I really want to read more things written by you. There are sometimes a few spelling mistakes here and there but really, that's how it is with everyone. (of course, a little extra praise is given for writing about my favourite captain =D)
As for the next chapter...
...how about contemplating his own upbringing/history? It'd be interesting to have your view of that.
Keep on writing, mate, and I'll keep on reading. ^^ |
 Hajiscello 2009-03-31 . chapter 2LOL! I just love Mayuri-san! Please continue it's really good. |
 Espada Zero 2009-03-26 . chapter 2What about the idea of having a son, or a proper heir, so to speack. |
 lallyzippo 2009-03-26 . chapter 2Pretty amusing ^_^
Lookin' foward to the next chapter. |
 Kaiser Washington 2009-03-25 . chapter 2I like this fic. I think Mayuri does deserve more attention for all he does. And it's very likely that he gets inventor's block sometimes: what with all the work he does and how limited the Soul Society's resources are. Anyway, I found this both funny and interesting, and I hope you update soon. |
 I-Like-WAFFLES 2009-03-25 . chapter 1Personally UkiNemu FTW |
 I-Like-WAFFLES 2009-03-25 . chapter 2For the next chapter you could explain why he didn't want to mate with the female captains and vice-captains. |
 Master Bleach 2009-03-25 . chapter 2He needs experiments.
10/10 |
 MazokuTenshi 2009-01-31 . chapter 1LOL. I wanna see more! :D. Mayuri love! (Yes, I am a fan. XD) |
 RedxAlert 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Omg... that was so freaking funny. I actually spilt lucazade over the keyboard...
lol picking a son-in-law can be a little difficult in Soul Society... though I wonder about Ukitake though... hm
Anyway, I really look foward to the next update~ |
 Iwannabeahero 2008-12-26 . chapter 1very nice. I like it |
 Cowdy 2008-12-21 . chapter 1XP this is freaking awsome!
There aren't alot of daddy mayuri fics but there really should be. daddy mayuri rocks!! |
 Xer0-sama 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Damn it, Jouse, make a second chapter! |