That was cute, and your writing style for this was interesting, and refreshing.

I like this the way it is.

E! I loved it!

Keep writing,

Italy

hahaha funny i liked it makes me laugh

8D

Smut...smut would be nice..hehe...

Deichan in a kitty outfit...hehe...:3

You should definitely have a smutty second chapter! :D

yaoi smut! lol cant wait for the next chappie yupp yupp!-_ namu

random... but it was cute. _

U should leave it as it is

*Chants* YAOI!

Plz Yaoi?

YAOI SMUT LADY! COME ON!