Wicked start. Too bad this was never continued.

Nice story. Nice pairing too. I've read some nice Saffir/Sailor Mercury fics but I think the whole Saffir/Sailor Pluto pairing makes much more sense on a counta they're both a bit hermitish in their behavior. please update soon.
*Hands writer Saffir and Setsuna/Sailor Pluto e-plushies*
Enjoy!

::stomping on the ground You have to continue this fic! I demand a sequel!

OMG! I have been looking all over for another saffir/pluto! I think they are sooooo perfect for each other! Please write more! I would read it all the time! I have a feeling I'm going to be reading this ALOT! Make moooooooore! pretty peez w/ suga on top?

Btw- Saffir is a hottie

Wonderful. Your writing is great, your plot is great, and your characterization is just as great. It's a relationship that seems like it could happen; it's one of those 'what-ifs' that has no support for it in the series whatsoever...but you've written it in such a way that I wouldn't be surprised if this were a cut scene from the anime!

Awesome story nice job!

Terrific! Maybe because I adore Saffir myself Anyway, great fic...especially in the details