I loved it!

Aw... So sweet! =) Hehehe

Between good and bad I'd say it was good.

Good like: OH MY GOD THAT JUST SO TOTALLY MADE MY DAY IT WAS THE FRIGGIN CUTEST THING EVER STEPPED ON EARTH I CANT BELIEVE HOW FREAKING UNBELIEVABLY AWESOME THAT JUST WAS good.

So yeah, it was good.

OMG! They were KISSING!
They were gays...
anyway,I love your story and continue write more about this..

Now, this is what I like. real reactions. The only thing that was a little off to me was the girls "“I didn’t realize“" cause from the little she saw she shouldn't have realized anything. Except if she had been watching him for a while and stuff I guess.
But! that's aside the point. I totally enjoyed the reactions. While hot man sex is nice, I like it better when it evolves over time. Not just 'I love you too! now do me."

Lovely story~
*faves*

You know, this could go as a rated T, it doesn't really have any strong sexual content, people will really appreciate it there as it's just two boys kissing; but darn was that funny!

Perfect length and a good flow throughout the story. I loved how they all were IC. A very sweet one-shot ^_^

The length and flow of this fic was perfect, not rushed, but not tediously long. It also just so happened to be adorable, amazingly well-written and entirely IC~ =] thanks for writing such a cute oneshot!

so cute~ write more~ love it!

No! why!? Why does it have to be a random one-shot!? Really!? >sigh< This is amazing and it's made all the funnier by the fact that they're all in character. Hugs be unto you. >but still sad it's only a one-shot

UWHA!
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS!

That! Was! Great! I heart you, my dear, I really do. I love reading jealousy involving fanfics. :) Though I like jealous Doumeki best, but you pulled off an in character jealous Watanuki. ;) Write more. --jealous Dou this time--

Ah! That was so cute! I love it. You write awesomely. :D

hahaha..watanuki is poor with words..hahaha

Well done! Very tightly written and on point. No grammatical errors (thank you so much!). Much appreciated.