Good story, well done.

Good story so far, but I really don't think they'd leave their hotel due to the risk. They could just as easily wait until tomorrow after the arrest to do the tourist thing, risk-free.

I was rereading this story which is very good. However, I picked something up this time that I missed previously. Earlier when the team was deciding whether to continue the mission or just bust Seth, Sarah told Chuck she wasn't going to have sex with Seth. Here she says she needs to do it. Irregardless of the actual outcome, I think it would be unlikely for Chuck to have missed this lie. Sarah lied to Chuck knowing this was coming to get him to ok continuing the mission. BIG PLOT HOLE as I doubt anyone would have let this slide without at least some commnent or discussion.

Great story bro. To be honest I fealt that Casey was a little OOC at times but overall it was a great story, and a great sequel. In the chance that you read this, I see that the vote was a tie, and I unfortunatly didn't get a chance to vote, so I would just like to tell you that i'd love a sequel to this, with Sarah being jealous (because I love fics where she is). Thanks for another awesome story dude

Much as I love Sarah and Chuck, I don't know if they'd make it through the Judgment Gate in "Ah! My Goddess: The Movie."

Your versions of Sarah and Chuck have tears in their eyes A LOT. Not criticizing, but doesn't that seem melodramatic? To have them cry whenever they talk about their feelings?

The usual bad-guy-appears-to-know-something-but-doesn't-real ly-know-anything bit. Used to great effect in the pilot for "Leverage." And nice work using it here.

Never be normal.

Love the story...still like how Chuck uses his intelligence versus the Intersect. Glad you put it all together.

I think I have now read virtually everything that you have written on this site and I have loved it all. The first thing I did when this review page opened was to click the 'Subscribe to Author (Alert)' button just to make sure.

I really enjoyed the dynamic with the Laura character although I have to admit that I was really hoping she was going to ditch that douchebag Seth and hook up with Casey again. When the four of them were in the casino just chilling together it seemed about as perfect as it could be. Will Laura be making an appearance in the sequel?

I am an avid reader of the Dark Intersect and basically drop everything when an update comes through and the ironic thing is that having read this I am now looking forward to that being over so that you can continue this Arc, but at the same time I am desperate for that arc not too finish! Ah, the dilemmas.

you are a terrific writer giving just enough action, plenty of fluff and nothing too out of character (apart from the fluff which the show refuses to give us at the moment). thank you so much for sharing.

strange but good

GREAT STORY WELL LAID OUT MAGIC

Altogether great Fic, love it.

My only issue is your obsession with Blouses. Or, more specifically, the unbuttoning of said item.

that was so beeping AWSOME but when you had sarah call and say she was staying in vegas I was like NO! lol but I liked the end

Great story.