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Reviews for: Phantom Pain
Anon
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
How in the world does this only have three reviews?

"What your specific intentions are towards my person, with your wanton picking up and flinging a fellow about."

Wanton picking up and flinging about, guh-hah!

The dialouge, vernacular, and language in this are absolutely stunning. I can so clearly hear their voices it's not even funny. This old-timey narratve can cause fanfiction writers a lot of trouble, and you pulled it off amazingly.

This is my absolute epitome of Master and Commander fanfiction, whatever that may mean. Thanks for this.

-Anon
Grim Lupine
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
*Oh*. This is just plain stunning. Not only does this read in POB's voice, so that I can clearly *hear* Jack and Stephen saying their lines, you've written this so, so well. *Very* nicely done. :)
saighnean
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
This was absolutely touching and wonderful! Thanks so much for a fabulous read! ♥
I Will Consume Your Soul
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
Oh my, I just...oh...my...God. That story, was simply amazing. I want to write a review with a spoiler in it...but I just feel like people will read these before they actually read the story. Either way, I love this story, I've favorited it in every way possible. There aren't any more ways for me to express how much I loved reading this. Your use of language, the expressionism...that you've drawn from readers like me, were it a piece of art made just for Hellenistic periods. (lol ah yes, lovely bad jokes :D) ANYWAY! I love you...SO MUCH!
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