 BlindMaster 2009-07-17 . chapter 1holas aca el man me gusto tu historia muy buena segui escribiendo ahora toy leendo tus fics yo soy un fiel seguidor del kigo del toko, taang, azulaang, bwen, robXrae y demases comunes y ahora soy fan del kigo :) sigan escribiendo |
 LycanRed 2009-01-22 . chapter 1Wow. I've read several of your stories before now, but this one takes the preverbial cake. While I don't have much of a taste for the more erotic stories, the way you depicted the aspect of BDSM that the majority of people don't understand, the love and trust it takes to do it right, is wonderful. I myself have a rather, shall we say 'open' view of the world, and I have met more than one couple who show their love in such a fashion, but it is largly missunderstood. It is extremely refreshing to read something that depicts such acts as something more than some kind of lust driven act of abhorrible sex. Anyway, thank you for your continued writing, I quite enjoy reading your work.
PeaceOut
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 MustangWill 2009-01-17 . chapter 1I absolutely loved it! You should write more of this |
 Rain Addict CM 2008-12-11 . chapter 1ok that was kinky but i loved it! =)
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 NegativeSpaces 2008-11-12 . chapter 1*Whistles* Damn..you sure put the twins in a different light. Not that I'm complaining, of course. I can actually see Kasy and Sheki in the BDSM, what with Shego's genes and all. Kim and her green skinned lover should so have a secret BDSM relationship aswell xD Only thing, try and put more detail into the sex scenes, however brief. I could see it, but I couldn't feel it (which, in a sex scene, you want). Other than that, good work :) |
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